Here is our current design. http://launch.gcdetective.com/free-…rk=clckbth It is not converting as well as we would like.
We would like a more simple version. Our current version is too busy with too many points of focus.
Here are some good simple designs that convert well.
If you can't view those pages because you are not in US I've attached a picture of each of them. Notice that it is more simple and all content appears above the fold (in other words you can see all content without having to scroll down).
So we need something similar to the two above but a place for our video also. I would like to see two possible versions. One with a place with our video and also one without a place for a video more similar to the two above. Again the problem with our version is that it's too busy. To many things going on.
We also like the Step 1, Step 2, Step 3 that you see in the other designs. Makes it simple.